by Pat Darnell
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Resource notes taken,
goes directly into paper,
re-write up to three drafts,
handled and edited later
FedEx waits at my door
depending on paper cuts
mind, body, and soul sore
this rhyme sucks more 'n more
Sometimes I get so tired
and bloody, I just let it go,
regardless of the stage it is in,
walk away, slip away pliered
Sometimes I hang in
for harmony obfuscated
Sometimes focus abated
from beginning to end,which makes sensual
harmonious voice,
brilliant content and style
as if a palette choice
with plan visualand a foot in the eternal
Often focus fraught,
and my humor is not --
really start to stooper
sounding like a Hoover.
Addled ambulates
damaging briefs
in long winded tides
pressure sucking out insides
Much befuddlement
esoteric rudiments
languages, logarithms
algorithms, audacity
balanced formulations,
postulated reason,
simple formula
in judicial sensing
canceled bail out
thought opinion in
faulty grammar cleansing
more efficient stuff
more concise intention than declaration suffocation
In conjured systems
and time lagged creations
due to counselors
and others whose
myths of truth's roots
Yet, they that are just file clerks,
inefficient at that...
that anyone places trust in
Postulate that crap
Because I am older enciting
have been creative 42 years
drafting, designing, certifying
just to be nullified by peers
printing, painting, presenting
trading at shows,
I jam as much
into assignment
as possible;
TEXT me tomorrow ..
OK?
pat. pend. / Pat Darnell / Thanks to Y. Ono for posing
2 comments:
I enjoyed reading your poems :)
Hi Marinela;
I just left a reply on your site Comments under Music Poem.
Thanks for your [short] compliment, short poems \ short compliments ... hehe ... get it?
Oh well, do make yourself at home here at MooPig ... as i recon at your site from time to time and glean from the fruit of your labors.
Ciao, sincerely, Patrick
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